My instructor’s guide

Focus- There is one clear, well focused topic. Main ideas are clear and are well supported by detailed and accurate information.
Organization- The introduction is inviting, states the main topic, and provides an overview of the paper. Information is relevant and presented in a logical order. The conclusion is strong.
Voice- The author’s purpose of writing is very clear, and there is strong evidence of attention to audience. The author’s extensive knowledge and/or experience with the topic is/are evident.
Word Choice- The author uses vivid words and phrases. The choice and placement of words seems accurate, natural, and not forced.
Sentence structure, Grammar, Spelling- All sentences are well constructed and have varied structure and length. The author makes no errors in grammar, mechanics, and/or spelling.

I recommend reference rather than editing that I wrote.

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