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Can someone look at this paper and help me with the correction that the Instructor ask of me….I am bit overwhelmed…and English is my second language.

Here is her feedback:

Hi Stefanie:

1. Good tone. Taking a collaborative approach is highly constructive.

2. Look through all grammar issues: Standard used is not correct (Standard issue.) I would also like for you to get (place) the employees that (who) serviced…

3. The focus and sim here is to find a way forward; to use the mistakes as a template for how to find solutions. Do you not have any suggestions in this context? A new software system? Some sort of checks and balances plan that could be implemented?