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Could you help me correct my Right, Reason from Wrong sentenceplease?
1. Wrong: During studying, she had inspired to explore her homeland by herself.
Right: While studying, she was inspired to explore her homeland by herself.
Reason: A) word choice and past participle.
B) had is past perfect tense, was is passive voice.
2. Wrong: In May 2010, she started hiking from southwestern to northeastern of
South Korea.
Right: In May 2010, she started hiking from southwestern to northeastern
South Korea.
Reason: northeastern is adj, South Korea is noun, adj + N, (not need pref: of)
3. Wrong: During the 35 days traveling, she had many obstructions that she felt to
give up the trip.
Right: While traveling for 35 days, she had many difficulties that made her want
to give up.
Reason: A) word choice and past participle.
B) word choice à obstructions mean something that blocks with an
obstacle or an act of obstructing, difficulties mean
a trouble or struggle.
C) sentence structure à adj clause.
4) Wrong: When she came back, she obviously saw the civilization life in town.
Right: When she came back, she obviously saw the civilized life in town.