I need a revision and a final draft written for the Rough Draft attached. The feedback from instructor is also attached. Here are the instructions for the assignment:
By the due date assigned, review your final draft carefully, making sure that you have edited and formatted it carefully. Once you are satisfied with it, submit it.
Remember to review the following items before submitting your work.
- Include on the title page the title of your essay, your name, the class, your instructor’s name, and the date
- Include appropriate headers, spacing, and font, according to APA guidelines.
- Repeat the title on the top line of the second page.
- Be sure that your essay is at least 1,200 words in length.
- Include a clear thesis statement in your introduction, and support it with quotes, examples, and facts from at least three credible sources.
- Include a separate references page. Encyclopedia articles (such as those from Wikipedia or Ask.com) are not acceptable sources.
- Double-check that each in-text citation includes the author’s name, the year of publication, and the page or paragraph number.
- Check your references page using the APA Citation Helper to assist you.
Note: An abstract is not required, but it may be included if desired by the student